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THE HOLOCAUST
Contributed by
fadingdreams
on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 09:46:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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PEOPLE WHO HAVE SURVIVED
ARE STRONG AND REVIVED
THEY TOOK THE BEATINGS
AND WENT WITHOUT EATING
THEY COULDVE BEEN KILLED
BUT THEY WERE STRONG WILLED
THEY WERE TIRED AND WEAK
AND COULDNT EVEN SPEAK
THEY WERE TORTURED BECAUSE THEY WERENT PERFECT
BUT THEY KNEW THEY WERE WORTH IT
THEY TOO HAD TO PAY THE COSTS
AND GO THROUGH THE HOLOCAUST
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fadingdreams
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2005-09-17 21:46:18]
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Re: THE HOLOCAUST
(User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 11:23:14 PM AEST
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Hi. A little too much rhyming for my taste and the uppercase has to go! It is a sensitive subject and I think could have been approached in a more subdued manner but I do see what you were going for. Not bad for a high school project. All in all, I did like it.
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Re: THE HOLOCAUST
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 08:27:09 AM AEST
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| It is good to remember the things of the past. Good write for a highschool student. I agree with Rita about the uppercase though. |
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