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Sing It Will End
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:30:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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A simple mistake
Now Im all to blame
You set upon me
The fault and the shame
Just an honest mistake
You scream at me
And I run away
Defenseless and weak
Another mistake
Fingers blistered and bruised
Victim of anger
Used and abused
One too many mistakes
Cry up in my room
Spread out on the floor
Sing it will end soon
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blue_angel
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2005-09-18 21:30:40]
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Re: Sing It Will End
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by Archie on
Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 09:35:56 PM AEST
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| I am not sure what to say to you about your situation. Your poem was a good read, it took some years before me and my mom could hold a conversation. It will probably be the same for you. Until then don't give up and keep doing things from your heart. |
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Re: Sing It Will End
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:52:18 PM AEST
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aww jennie! your damn parents. when will they learn to leave you alone, jennie? they are f***en losers.. don't worry about them. they are idiots and don't know they make it worse. just ignore them and talk to me, jennie. take care of yourself (God knows you can't trust them*) well, have fun with the baby! (lol). great write, jennie, keep up the good work!
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