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Fallen Angel
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 11:56:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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* Fallen Angel *
Sassy fallen angel
Risen from the depths of hell
Youre a demon of fire
Your weapon is Desire
Emanating from your cold, ice heart
Scented sickly sweet perfume
Cloistering within your tomb
With your black widow spider
Poison, seeping further inside her
Your bite delivered with a kiss
Cat lit in black
Youre on guard for attack
Youre a boa constrictor
You sure did trick her
With your serpentine, dangerous love
Cruel whispering lies
Sugar-coated candy sighs
Youre rotted to the core
Youre a seedy painted whore
Dressed in lace with your fancy face
Cloudy, hazy visionary
Lover, lover, quite contrary
Youre the master of the trance
To the slave of your own dance
Youre the deceiver of the truth
Youre the drug to the addiction
Youre not the cure, but the affliction
Youre a disease of the mind
Like a cancer youre entwined
Sucking her dry like a leech
MW 19.09.05
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Re: Fallen Angel
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:04:27 PM AEST
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| Nifty. I don't know why 103 people have failed to comment on this. The first two lines of this completely contradict, but it's one of those good 'ah ha' contradictions. As in, like how you did it on purpose. The usage of adj. and adv. is groovy. The line "You're a seedy painted whore" is amusing. The rhythm is catching, too. (^_^)b |
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