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Demon - Part II
Contributed by
WAE
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:14:10 PM in AEST
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I was born not being asked
Whether I wanted to...
For it was so absolute
To be despersed among the space and time.
No worries, no sensations... Nothing...
But then it came and
I was extracted
From the eternal euphoria of non-existence
And thrown mercilessly into the world
Of colors, sounds, smells, and feelings.
So different, so strange this was
But what could I do?
That was a decision of Almighty
And I began to live and learn.
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WAE
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Re: Demon - Part II
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:18:25 PM AEST
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views of being born... everything is miniturized, personality is small, indescreit grows as (you)r arms, hair, grow
nice poem, thats what came to mind as i read it
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Re: Demon - Part II
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by remote on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:29:49 PM AEST
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Liked the idea of being dispersed among the space and time without worries, always in eternal euphoria of non-existance arriving in the sensational world of colours, sounds, smell, touch and emotions.
Idea conveyed on the poem does not look at being born as something positive, which it is. |
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Re: Demon - Part II
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:42:40 PM AEST
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You know, you once told me that poetry wasn't your thing, that it wasn't your strength, yet everytime I read one of your poems I don't believe you. Heehee.
This is good, Alex. You should give yourself more credit.
Good write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Demon - Part II
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by Pianoman745 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:27:20 PM AEST
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| Nice veiw on the world. good description, it really puts the reader into the poem. |
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Re: Demon - Part II
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 04:41:43 PM AEST
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| My view of this is very different. This is well written though. |
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Re: Demon - Part II
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:15:50 AM AEST
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Your poems probe the very depth of being.Alex. I believe man is meant to do so.probe and ponder.
, I do believe there is a Divine purpose to everythiong and we have to admit we do not understand it, and are stuck to make a leap, faith in the mind of God, the source of all existence, of everything that exists, and will exist. In the thought of God you exist already without physical birth on a given planet or level of existence. You are there. In His thought.
Our views and perceptions are so very limited. It's hard to come to grips and tackle the issue at all.
Bless you for daring.
Hugs
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