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The Happiest Day Of My Life
Contributed by
JenJen
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 02:44:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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The happiest day of my life
Is the day a frown turns into a smile
A sound of laughter
The cry of saddness
The happiest day of my life
Was when you walked through the door
With your love and kindness
And your passion to care
You've helped without knowing it
Those are the happiest days of my life
-xXx-
Copyright ©
JenJen
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2005-09-19 14:44:29]
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Re: The Happiest Day Of My Life
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:41:09 PM AEST
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So what sre you feeling now? You don't make it clear in your poem.
I don't think your words are random just incomplete, one more stanza could have done it. It is a good write though. 4 stars |
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Re: The Happiest Day Of My Life
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by sprinter27 on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:04:04 PM AEST
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yeah, i agree... a little incomplete. but it was good anyway. a little confusing, but good, keep up the good work!
~sprints |
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