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On the Edge
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:35:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You couldve pulled me back
Couldve put me back on track
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You could have been a friend
And pulled me away from the end
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You couldve saved me and my life
Couldve helped me win this strife
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You couldve easily saved me
But I guess you were an enemy
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
And then I felt your hands
They were as soft as sand
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
When I felt your hands push
And I fell with a swoosh
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
But Im not anymore
Im done with this war
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
You couldve saved me
But then you just pushed me
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
And I am about to die
Because of your lies
I was on the edge
Right on the ledge
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Re: On the Edge
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 04:38:14 PM AEST
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The squeaky wheel gets the oil
This is a great write and you can always be pulled back so long as you don't give up. |
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Re: On the Edge
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by WAE on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:10:57 PM AEST
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I liked it too.
Good luck.
Alex |
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Re: On the Edge
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:30:13 PM AEST
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well GOSHERS this is just a great poem shelly. i dOoOoOo looove it. a great deal i do. ur a terrific writer.
oh and this damn baby... i want to break it aaaugh (i probably sound like some sort of child molester... people... the baby is NOT REAL lol)
jennie* xoXOxo |
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