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Statue Of A Man
Contributed by
Pianoman745
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Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 05:21:27 PM in AEST
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My friend a statue
His fixed stare, never turns, never blinks
A hollow body, filled with air
A single tap, he tells me why
His only secret
His only regret
Hes not really there
Understood, yet overlooked
An aged expression
Regardless of time
Something hed know
If he were a man
His sadness is hidden
By an authors touch
Who realized, hes perfect
I know how he feels
An expressionless gaze
I bow my head, because he cannot
To a world who forgot
Hes only a statue, of a man.
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Pianoman745
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2005-09-19 17:21:27]
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Re: Statue Of A Man
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:49:47 PM AEST
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THIS IS JUST A BEAUTIFUL WRITE--
I REALLY ENJOYED THE POEM --- SOMETIMES I WISH I WERE JUST A STATUE --- I LOVE WHERE YOU SAY " HIS SADNESS IS HIDDEN BY AN AUTHOR'S TOUCH-- KEEP IT UP |
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Re: Statue Of A Man
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:52:14 PM AEST
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| This is a good write. It is as though you are speaking for someone who can not speak for his or her self. You do a good job at it too. Great imagery |
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Re: Statue Of A Man
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 11:57:17 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. Basically what Archie said. Can't add much to that. Just keep it up :) |
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