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my quiet place
Contributed by
ipanema_gal
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:42:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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dead quiet
not a word
my marching
matched those next to me
i was scared
but I wont tell anyone
thats my secret
A sudden jolt peirces me
i didnt feel it at first
but my once green coat
is now a dampened red
a cold air blew
and i found myself freezing
in the 90 degree weather
my boots didn't feel so tight anymore
and i finally got
some well deserved rest
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Re: my quiet place
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:47:38 PM AEST
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| Okay, that is a bit scarry, I know what happened. you got shot. I hope to never know how that feels. |
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