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robyns poem
Contributed by
timmy5
on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:22:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If i were the night sky
then you would be my stars
and i know that no one could share
a love as pure as ours.
but sometimes at night
i look at that sky
i look at those stars
and i wonder why?
i wonder what happened
to our perfect love
i thought you were my angel
god sent from above.
i wonder what i would do
if i ever lost you
how would i cope
if i dont have you
then i look at the stars
and i see your face
smiling down on me
with a sweet embrace.
then i know
everything will be alright
even if you love me
just one more night.
i couldnt stand
to lose you
you know thats true
so please
just remember
ill always
love you!
Copyright ©
timmy5
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2005-09-19 19:22:59]
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Re: robyns poem
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by Mild_Tempest on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 07:46:46 PM AEST
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| Beautifully composed. I loved the romance you put in. Wonderful write. |
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Re: robyns poem
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 09:19:38 PM AEST
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| Great poem on the 4th line of the 4th stanza change don't to didn't and the flow of your poem will be perfect |
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Re: robyns poem
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by CarolinaBlue on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:08:38 PM AEST
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I am absolutely overwhelmed at this. You didn't even say anything to me about it! You have shown me that true love of the purest kind is possible and I hope you know I love you more than words could possibly say... This is the sweetest thing you could ever have done and I thank you from the bottom of my heart and soul. If you could only see my face right now.....smooches xoxox
~Robyn(Blue)~ |
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Re: robyns poem
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by CarolinaBlue on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 03:10:14 AM AEST
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ok, don't think me crazy, but this is to much of a coincidence...my fiance's screenname is very much the same and you know my name of course, he also had a star named after me, so I apologize for the confusion, teehee, I still thought it a lovely write, very genuine indeed. I'm sure she will love it as you could already tell by my reaction previously. Nice work!
~Blue~(Robyn) |
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