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Tell me why?
Contributed by
bhav
on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tell me why?
Does my heart miss a beat every time you look at me.
Tell me why?
Does a red rose look like the best thing in your hand.
Tell me why?
Do I see that mischief in your eyes.
Tell me why?
Do I freeze in a place every time you walk cross me.
Tell me why?
Has the moon in the dark sky become my best friend.
Tell me why?
Does my heart say, " she's the one, she's the one. "
Tell me why?
Do my eyes fill up with tears every time I think that I might lose you.
Tell me why?
Do I stay long awake thinking about you, when the whole world is fast asleep.
Tell me why?
Did god create an organ called as the heart, is it because he wanted it to break, when you and me part.
Tell me why?
Doesnt sleep cross my path,
Every minute I just think of you from the moment you depart.
Tell me why?
Do I feel like you are the star in the sky whom I can see, adore, love but I can never call you as mine.
Tell me why?
I can't stop loving you,
even thou when you are just there ,
right there in my heart .
Copyright ©
bhav
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2003-01-17 19:00:00]
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Re: Tell me why?
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by OreO on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:10:01 AM AEST
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Awwwwww!!! nothin wrong with questions....nothin wrong with loving someone this deeply either....this is beautiful....love this one bhav...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Tell me why?
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by bhav on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 08:50:52 AM AEST
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| Oreo, thanks once again for liking my poem. It’s always my pleasure to know that my poem is been appreciated. To tell you a secret I can fall in love with people in my poems only. When it comes to real life they avoid me like a plague. |
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Re: Tell me why?
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by MichaelM93 on
Sunday, 9th January 2011 @ 12:07:31 PM AEST
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This is such a great poem, I understand exactly how you feel. And I especially love the line "Tell me why?
Do I feel like you are the star in the sky whom I can see, adore, love but I can never call you as mine. " It nearly brought me to tears. Excellent job! :') |
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