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Painful Creases
Contributed by
kareless
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Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:05:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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To turn in to myslef to find that peace that was so designed to be that peaceful silence to make all that rents space in my mind; real & whole again.
When times do heavy weigh & they do weigh heavy -- often!, yet not am I so inclined to turn that way for peace, but rather I am found running the opposite direction.
When looking back at what was then, nostalgia has not entered so close upon my threshold as it has today.
Looking dimly, as I have not yet closed my eyes. For it was future & mine I had a date & safely kept when I left one eye half open.
But the hours passing in these moments, I find not that peace of which I mentioned, to be lying in either myself or the hours that so dimly come.
In gasps for breath to stay afloat, I swallow in massive gulps, the strength not to slip into my core that lie so near & yet so very far.
For I have lost my peace of mind & that silent peace appears now to only be a piece of something in part that has been broken.
So, all that lies silently whole is a bunch of really broken pieces! Heavily layed upon my heart & mind, they have left in turn, deep & painful creases.
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Re: Painful Creases
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by wizard on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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i thought this was great...each line, though short, tells a vast story of feelings...nicely done!
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