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oral stimulation to make you fly higher
Contributed by
lancaster
on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:38:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Filthy minds think alike
So I know what you are thinking when you turn out the lights
I can tell by your finger crawling
You would rather be on top tonight
Instead of down
With pleasure I take you to town
And try to make it alright
Oral stimulation
Tactile behaviors with a hardcore mission
The way you throw my clothing off, as if you ever need my permission
It was in your eyes
Your inspiration was what sold out your lazy lies
A long day spinning on your head made you ever so tired
Sever the straps
Let loose and relax
Know that I have got your back
Remember that I love you
This is in no way a violent attack
It may sting
The initial feeling
As the shock fades deep into your skin
The redness blushes through
And because of you, I feel like a king
Not a ruler
But a redeemer of desire
A feeder of fire
My intentions are to make you fly higher
Dare enjoy the pleasure
And when we part
I will be someone you always remember
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Re: oral stimulation to make you fly higher
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 09:57:07 PM AEST
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| Wow, what a great write! Awesome imagery too. |
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Re: oral stimulation to make you fly higher
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by brew on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:07:36 PM AEST
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hmmmmmm this could go, any way. It makes ones imagine, deep thoughts. on so much. Great write.yet, I didnt think the nasty, way....I thought, so much differ. Thanks for the post.
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Re: oral stimulation to make you fly higher
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:15:49 PM AEST
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Hmmm...well...I thought a different way than brew...something more along the lines of that first one...lol....ummm...nice: )
H.S.
(Hoping one day she has something exciting to write about too) |
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Re: oral stimulation to make you fly higher
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 12:22:32 PM AEST
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| Awesome stuff. I liked how you used some rhymes, but didn't use rhymes for every line. It makes those lines stand out more. Very enjoyable. |
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