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Prevail
Contributed by
Eternal_Skies
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Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Shall I Stay in the Dark Abyss
Knowing that Nothing will give Hope?
Dark Winged Angels cover me
While the Light Attempts to Shine.
Crumbling from the Light
Our Hopes Progress Further
To the Depths of the Heart of the Demon
Only then will we Truly be Free.
With Eyes of Temptation and a Black Heart of Sins
Only the Lord and I are Able to Prevail the Darkness Inside.
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Eternal_Skies
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2003-01-17 20:20:00]
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Re: Prevail
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:25:55 PM AEST
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| I really liked this,I didnt see anything wrong with this write! Keep em coming! Christina |
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Re: Prevail
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by OreO on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:33:58 AM AEST
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Not that good?? Please dont go there....this poem was awesome..i love the line "Dark Winged Angels cover me" and "To the Depths of the Heart of the Demon" it has a darkness to it but then in the end it' s so full of inspiration and hope, it has a beautiful ending....this is a good write....not a thing wrong with this one......beautiful....i love it..
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