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BY THE SCENT OF THE FLAME
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:26:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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AND DEEP INSIDE I KNOW IT TO BE TRUE
THAT I AM NOT ABLE TO BE WITH YOU
ITS ALL MY FAULT, IM ALL TO BLAME
BUT WITHIN MY SOUL I HAVE NO SHAME
DESPERATION, TAKE ME, MAKE ME BLEED
UNTIL UPON MY OWN FLESH I DO FEED
MISERY AND DISGRACE, REPLACE MY NAME
IT IS MY FAULT IM WHAT I BECAME
STRAY FROM ME NOW, LEAVE MY TO CRY
FROM BUT A DISTANCE, STAY, WATCH ME DIE
YOUR EYES ARE A CURSE, THEY SCREAM SALVATION
BLINK IT AWAY, GIVE IN TO TEMPTATION
BY THE SCENT OF THE FLAME YOU WEEP AT MY GRAVE
WISHING FOR THE CHANCE FOR MY LIFE TO SAVE
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blue_angel
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2005-09-20 22:26:48]
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Re: BY THE SCENT OF THE FLAME
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by Mild_Tempest on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 11:38:38 PM AEST
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| Aww that's so sad. I loved the way it portrayed so many dark thoughts. Beautiful write. |
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Re: BY THE SCENT OF THE FLAME
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by bubbletoes on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:42:56 AM AEST
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im not fond of the caps lock the whole way through but it was a good read full of pain anger and sadness,..
the ryming went good throuout it,..it was smooth good job |
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