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Evaporated
Contributed by
bubbletoes
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 01:17:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I Fell
But i didnt fall hard enough to wake me up.
Blind and i cant see
It's just emptyness left inside me from what i have lost
My lips quiver and they go limp,..
Music brings tears to my eyes
Because what i listen to is depressing
But its what i need to hear,.
I am not remotley close to hungry,..it makes me sick to look at it,..
I crave it
I hunger but its not for food
I starve but cannot eat
At a wall i stare
One plain picture
All the lights are shut off
I cant even see the photo but i know its there
So in the darkness i stare
On a worn down chair
In a empty apartment
With the lights turned off
Starving,..
Because im addicted to you
But soon these feelings will Evaporate
And the lights will turn on
And the picture will fade,..
Copyright ©
bubbletoes
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2005-09-21 13:17:49]
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Re: Evaporated
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by maestar on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 01:54:01 PM AEST
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liked it very much.
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Re: Evaporated
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by Elayner27 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:18:42 PM AEST
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...Wow that is fantastic. I love the way it's set up and said. I can relate in so many different ways that it almost hurt just to read it. I can feel your pain as well as mine. Beautiful poem, very strong and touched me deeply. I liked it a lot.
Elayna
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Re: Evaporated
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:14:51 AM AEST
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| awesome write, well done! |
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