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I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
Contributed by
SurenderRose
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:27:05 PM in AEST
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I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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If I tell the secrets dat I confess I Shall go to hell
I shall be killed be sick and never grow well
invigorated By the ways dat I show ma eyes
The secrets dat I lies will make the village cry
Tis this day am Relining depress
In time I c in time I impress
I hate dat I cry my true secrets
In fashionate lies ma true regrets
I taboo the culture of sad appearances
Closing up doors and giving true hints
My secrets are relying and reentering me
Confessing is like god not letting me see
Ancients times I see the light
My true secrets teaches me wrong from rite
Ill kill ma self to not confess
Burn ma body and leave the rest
I heard dat lies can kill a soul
And maybe juss maybe turn it old
Tis Secrets dat I hold inside my mind
I dug up gold I dug up dimes
The tears I see my mother cry
are the tears dat tell me too wonder y
Is it because the secrets I hide
or is it because its all in my mind
The feeling dat my father haves Cuz of me
is the feelings dat I wonder and want to see
Is it because of the secrets I hold
is it because dang I dont know
I Shall Confess The Red Secrets
I Shall Confess The Red Secrets
It enduring in me like Friends regrets
I Shall Confess The Red Secrets- Amy Mbengue

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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:33:52 PM AEST
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A very compelling piece! Bravo!
~*~Tsubaki~*~ |
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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by SurenderRose on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 04:34:02 PM AEST
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| i help yall like this poem please feel free ta tell me yall feeling |
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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 05:43:22 PM AEST
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If you ever write it in English, let me know and I will give you my honest opinion.
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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by SurenderRose on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:27:01 PM AEST
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umm honey wat u me if i ever rite it in engish explain
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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by remote on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 06:58:42 PM AEST
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| Ignoring all the mobile text message cryptic language, it is a very good poetry. It would be nice if some of the words are not shortened till a alphabet is left, hope you are not missing any keys on your keyboard or paying service provider by every character you type, that would be a real shame. |
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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by SurenderRose on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:49:00 PM AEST
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sorry sweetheart but u not funny c dats how i write its ma style so juss let it b
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Re: I Shall Confess The Red Secrets [Am amaze am amaze the Riva has came]
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 04:51:29 PM AEST
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I like this. It reminds me of a comedy programme with 'The Two Ronnies' when the one enquired...." FUNEMNX?" and the other replied...."9IFE10M"
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