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Pellets of Life
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:03:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Rehabilitation for the soul
Fillin a personal
Hole
In the ground
Is where the tomb
Hides
If it were only true
I would assum,e that I have died
And have never been found
Alive
Beating on the inside
Looking in from the outside
Bang the door down
To get to what hurts in the low down-
Regions of the gut
Stomach emptied of rust
Choke on the smoke that burns me to dust
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2005-09-21 21:03:41]
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Re: Pellets of Life
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 09:22:40 PM AEST
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| i see this as an internal battle and the imagery rocks. great job. |
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