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My Own Doing
Contributed by
justme03
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Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:12:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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poem removed due to language
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Re: My Own Doing
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:18:56 AM AEST
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Kortnie this is somewhat sad but also revealing at one and the same time. I would utter one caveat however, and that is to say that noone, in my view makes themselves who or what they are. Instead, one's personality is a complex mix of contradictions between the person and the social environment in which he or she lives. For example, a poor person only feels poor in relation to the existence of a rich person. A person sometimes feels down, when in relation with someone who keeps telling them you should be like this, do that, think this etc... How that person reacts, develops and so on will no doubt be a product of the inner processes of the unique person, but not in isolation from the real world and real social relationships. Always remember that noone can live in a bubble, in complete abstractuion from reality, then you may not feel the need to be so self critical.. Good luck
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Re: My Own Doing
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:07:15 AM AEST
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| Ingenious....... your amazing talent shines through yet again... Absolutely amazing... I loved this poem so very much.... The way you present your emotions & the visuals....WOW WOW WOW..... Awesome poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: My Own Doing
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by Channing on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 03:11:15 PM AEST
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| Excellent write, it expresses deep emotion and sadness. Your talent really shows with this poem. |
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