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Still Life
Contributed by
sylviawalters
on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:36:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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You're always trying to make me stop,
But you just can't seem to see.
I really don't need any help,
This is how I want my life to be.
I enjoy the feel of the blade,
Drawing it across my skin.
If you were to watch me,
My face would show a grin.
You think I've lost all control,
But that's not why I use the knife.
I don't feel much emotion,
I cut to know there's life.
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sylviawalters
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2005-09-21 22:36:08]
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Re: Still Life
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by black-bruised-n-broken on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 10:48:48 PM AEST
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| its really good...hehehe...i no u....ur poems r good silly... |
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Re: Still Life
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by colinbaker62 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 06:11:03 AM AEST
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A myriad of emotions can be implied here and all in the melting pot at one and the same time. Interesting
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Re: Still Life
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:30:47 PM AEST
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| a true write |
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