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Sunset Sonata
Contributed by
Adreana
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Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 01:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sky is a melting pot of radiant colors.
Blue converges with gray which dives into yellow.
Yellow becomes a luscious peach turning pink
And pink is softly resting on a violet hue
Which carries everything gently to the horizon.
My eyes soak in this scene before it washes away
Into a black space cluttered with specks of bright white.
The lake spread below this natural painting
Reflects each detail with perfect grace.
Its water lies still, resembling a clean glass mirror.
The tall grass hugging its shores sways in a cool breeze
Creating a sweet melody which I cannot imitate.
I sit for a moment longer allowing myself to forget
All that I have been worrying about lately.
I hug my knees close to my chest and breathe in deeply.
I thank the colors in the sky for gracing me with their presence.
I compliment the lake on its keen ability to imitate.
I praise the breeze and the grass on their musical collaboration.
And as everything darkens I rise to my feet and walk away.
Goodnight wonderous world.
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2002-07-24 13:28:57]
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Re: Sunset Sonata
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by Kassidi on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 02:14:14 PM AEST
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Your words just flowed, I could picture a sunset right before my eyes. This poem was wonderful.
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Re: Sunset Sonata
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by Silverwings on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 03:23:30 PM AEST
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Your poem is so beautiful... I like how used used so many colours... it's like a painting of words!
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Re: Sunset Sonata
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 07:32:21 PM AEST
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Wonderful imagery, Adreana.. I loved this..I do this all the time...but couldn't have said it better.
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Re: Sunset Sonata
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 09:51:01 PM AEST
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Yes! Yes! Yes! Beautifully written Adreana - I must make a point of catching a few more sunsets myself - loved it lots!
Love
Terry xx |
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Re: Sunset Sonata
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 12:01:05 AM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful Adreana.the imagery, everything. It's a long time since I've seen a sunset..thankyou for this.
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