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Unidentified
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:15:03 PM in AEST
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I felt caught
within the grasp of
something.
What it was
I could not say.
For it existed
beyond the realms
of consciousness and
eluded all attempts of
identification.
It left within me
a sense of
emptiness,
not hopelessness
for I felt certain
what I sought lay
just beyond my reach.
It was more an unfulfilled
longing.
While I could not say
that I was
terrified,
apprehension somehow
seemed to fit.
Yet the vagueness
of the sensation, served
only to add to an overwhelming
need.
Stretching further
I reached out again,
determined.
My eyes were closed,
focused on some area
of secluded inner peace.
And there within the darkness
I found a comforting
voice.
My heartbeat stilled.
Breath came more easily.
Reassured,
I knew now, I was
not facing this alone.
There was another
somewhere out there ~
perhaps within me, that
understood.
Copyright ©
Nazmythian
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2005-09-22 15:15:03]
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Re: Unidentified
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:33:22 PM AEST
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| wow Nazzy what an amazing write. |
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Re: Unidentified
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 05:06:28 PM AEST
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~~~***STANDING OVATION***~~~
>>>>>>>>>who hasn't the suitable words to praise such a poetic masterpiece... but will make another attempt once coherent thought returns...>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Parfait, cheri.
~*Stephy*~ |
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Re: Unidentified
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by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:51:13 AM AEST
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| Well done, you quite suceeded in conveying the 'vagueness' beautifully. |
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Re: Unidentified
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:21:04 PM AEST
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Well now sir Nazzy!! Somewhere, somehow, some matter of factness has begun to rub off on you...and I must say the results are amazing!
This says alot without identifying anything other that that elusiveness....nicely done! |
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Re: Unidentified
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:14:56 PM AEST
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Ah, dearest naz. How did this one elude me? I was here today
reading your story and failed to see this. Wonderful and poetic
as always, scotty. Beautiful beyond words. Flawless and inspiring.
And so very profound. It's almost like something that everyone
is longing for and no one can seem to express nor to find.
Well done nazzy. Again!
Lights dim........take a bow!
~Rocksie |
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Re: Unidentified
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:54:02 PM AEST
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This one hit me right between the eyes. That sense of longing...I can relate so well. All the mistakes we make trying to find answers on this earth, when they truly lie beyond and, yes, within ourselves, if we know where to look and "whom" to look to. I think you mean "who" understood there in the last line.
Hey, only one grammatical correction.
Stitch 8)
(who now feels she has been useful today) |
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