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No More Smiles
Contributed by
Elayner27
on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 07:14:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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She used to smile so much.
She used to be so happy.
But no more can she smile.
It has finally been too much.
That smiling face that hid so much,
Has been cast aside and broken.
Now these tears are revealing,
It's showing all her lyes.
Now everyone looks down at her.
She stares at her shoes,
To avoid cruel eye contact.
She knows she's worth nothing.
She knows she has lost all love.
She knows she's all alone...
And no smile can hide it.
Copyright ©
Elayner27
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2005-09-22 19:14:18]
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Re: No More Smiles
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 08:25:14 PM AEST
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| i really like this poem...its reminds me of how i used to be and sometimes still am...i felt like i was nothing...but no matter how much you feel like ur not worth anything there is going to be poeple out there that are going to think that you are worth everything..keep up the good write!! |
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Re: No More Smiles
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by Shattered_soul on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 11:40:04 PM AEST
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You wrote exactly about me, its so sad that is it not. when you always feel the tears in your eyes, and like no one will be by your side.
well in depression you are an awasome writer.
I hope you soon feel wanted.
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Re: No More Smiles
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by mjh0813 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:33:53 AM AEST
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great write! i feel like this alot...i smile but usually its a fake one. just try to keep your head up and ignore those ppl who think your nothing! it helps sometimes
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Re: No More Smiles
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by Tsukasa on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 12:10:30 PM AEST
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Very nice. It surprising how so much of that describes how I feel and act. I think thats sad... how some one can feel this way. But keep your head up. Maybe it'll pass...
Lovely poem. Keep up the good writing.
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