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Forfeit
Contributed by
Channing
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Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:39:29 AM in AEST
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oops
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Once in awhile a problem comes
Where people have to make a choice
To cower and add up sums
Or stand up and rejoice
Most dont want to lose the sight
But dont have the courage to fight
People always become too effete
So in the end they will feel defeat
Why is it in our nature
To always give in?
Why wont we mature
And take the fighting steps to win?
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-09-23 02:39:29]
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Re: Forfeit
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by remote on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:40:15 AM AEST
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| Loved the simplicity and clarity of the way thoughts are presented. As far as the question posed it is quite a damning assumption at it is in everyone's nature to 'always' give in and retreat. Some do and some don't. |
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Re: Forfeit
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by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 06:01:08 PM AEST
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i wish i could write about things like so simply and eloquently. i love this!
luv Kortnie aka Anna ( i have other names too)lol |
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