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Cold
Contributed by
lil_pup91
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Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:14:27 PM in AEST
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Cold
So cold
Im freezing
My body is shivering
My mind is stopping
My heart is slowing too
My stomach hurts
and theres no cure
Please make it strop
Warm me up
Release me from all this pain
Hold me till it stops
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Re: Cold
(User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:09:07 AM AEST
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What's making you cold?
What's making you freeze?
cold usually means uncaring
stomach hurts could refer to anxiety
you don't give enough imfo for me to know
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