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Breaker Breaker
Contributed by
CrazyCowboy557
on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:14:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Broken promises are left on my pillow
Fates willowing voice still bellows
Its been two months and you've moved on
I'm still singing the same song
I sit here watching the falling stars
My mind drifting towards Mars
Breaker Breaker, she's still gone
Breaker Breaker, she done me wrong
Whats left of a man beaten and broken
My hearts out of order and missing all the tokens
I'm supposed to be a protector to many
But I sit here drunk at Denny's
Letting time slip through my hands
I'm through trying to be your man
I'm through being the protector
Maybe I'll try being a neglecter
Neglect everything you tell me
Neglect everything I may see
Be the one without a heart
Go ahead and tear the rest apart
Finish what you have started
Even though we have departed
You may think the tears I cry are for you
But there are many things that you never knew
Lonely is starting to kill me inside
But its nothing compared to last time
Breaker Breaker, she's not coming back
Breaker Breaker, thats the cold hard fact
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2005-09-24 09:14:51]
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Re: Breaker Breaker
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by maestar on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:20:21 AM AEST
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| I like the anger in this one its very good. |
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Re: Breaker Breaker
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by mylady on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 11:57:06 AM AEST
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| Very nice poem i know what it feel when lonelyness kicks in ..... mylady |
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Re: Breaker Breaker
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by remote on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:31:01 PM AEST
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| Started out in quite a dull way, I almost gave up reading it, then things got interesting and carried on forward very well. |
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Re: Breaker Breaker
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by rie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 10:06:54 PM AEST
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touching poem, love does hurt
but always worth a chance
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