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a loss of value
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 02:25:25 PM in AEST
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no glow in my soul
a dark spot in the night
i've lost all i believe in
no family no friends no god
what do i do what can i scream
tested and failed were my thoughts of this fourth night
confused by my questions my teacher failed without a fight
stating the facts as best he could he lost my view
i still believe don't get me wrong i'm not following as i use to do
another soul wondering this world the fear of man so strong
never trusting anyone my spirit feels so wrong
alone and not far this light will slowly fade
walking this ground hiding in this shade
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Re: a loss of value
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:07:08 PM AEST
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| Regan, you may mistrust mankind, tho not all are bad. Never give up trusting the Great Spirit Father. He is with you always and if you follow morality, caring and brotherhood all will be fine. Don't mistrust, just be very careful in you judgement of people. Not all are your friends, not all are enemies. That is hard for all of us to learn. I send blessings to you my friend and the guidance of the spirits of mankind. dove |
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Re: a loss of value
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 06:38:15 PM AEST
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Not all is bad dear Regan. There are times where I know everything seems to look so bleak. Seek His guidance and you shall not be led astray.
Another sensational write filled with sadness and deep emotions. Keep penning friend. I like ur style.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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