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IN AWE OF YOU!
Contributed by
ROBERT_EDGAR_BURNS
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 04:27:31 PM in AEST
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I stand, still stand in awe of you,
Through a thousand bygone days.
For every minute that passes by,
Leaves me that much more amazed!
Each day, each day, youre a vision.
I always have to rub my eyes.
Then I stand transfixed with open mouth,
For in your beauty Im paralyzed.
I dream, still dream, each night of you.
Like a vision youre my delight.
But in my waking hours is,
Where my dreams then real, take flight.
I hope, I hope, each day I live,
For a new tomorrow that I may say,
How much I am in awe of you,
And that I love you more each day!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by autumn_zephyr on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:02:18 PM AEST
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| Very heartfelt, sweet, nice write. |
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:04:13 PM AEST
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How very lucky you are to have someone you love that much. Blessings to you and yours.
Dove |
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by grim6669 on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 05:10:32 PM AEST
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| hey robert. this is grim6669. i like it it's kool. it makes perfect sense and it's easy to understand. that's good. you should check out mine soon.post a comment! |
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by mindset on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:06:00 PM AEST
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no i dont see it it should be
Both stood far in a world of close
They looked across a valley so far
Like two moons they come to be
AN equal in a settling sea
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by brew on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 06:49:00 PM AEST
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To have a "special" one who you can take and give all for. is the sweetest gift one can give, or receive. It means happines...for both. Cherish it forever.! Very nice write.
Brew~! |
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by LyricalTearz on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 08:22:44 PM AEST
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This is a write that speaks to so many. How lucky for you to have an awe inspiring person in your life to write about. Beautiful flow, the first and second stanzas my favorite of all.
Lyric ;-) |
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:15:37 PM AEST
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Well said.... as always I am in awe after reading your poetry...
Thank you..
Jenni |
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Re: IN AWE OF YOU!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 09:31:56 PM AEST
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Why this is just really beautiful words, enjoyed it much, tender words, lovely soul to write, keep going, I am enjoying your writes, as you are new to me as I am to you as a reader. Nice to meet you,
Raquel Leah :D |
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