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The truth
Contributed by
mindset
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 07:24:47 PM in AEST
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I write now a poem on all that is
To define the way it could of been
To resolve many questions
You all have inside
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Lets begin
What is love.
When you feel the fire within
And you look at eyes of soul begin
We all think the truth lies in our dominion
The touch of us together a place to begin
Look at each other its a rare sin
You trying to only ever to fit in
True love comes undiscovered
In your eyes the only mother
Take the embrace the only penetration
Ask the question is it only desire
Love is undefined a place so still
A setting still no more up hill
A message deep down inside
You are no longer alone
A feeling that your the pure sound
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Health
What is it they tell us to eat
Every word a silver embrace
That we shoud not be this
Or that of be
They say dont smoke it will end your boat
Yet a lie awaits I will tell you later
But remember save your letter
You roll the dice if you know what
You will pay the price
Smoke the high price a sin becomes the wheel
Ever turning a place
That will will be ever unstill
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Society
This is where the problem begins
Lost hope a place of despair
We come to close the bible holy word
Yet we all the last singing bird
All lies im afraid
The religion of all
The credit the wheel the house despair
A wise man walked a long time be
He spoke the word of few
Few listened and the day became the say
Problem was the many only droped a head
To disagree and yet a smile remained true
Amongst the faith of the holly man
Family
We all have lost faces of old
At the time places of gold
So much wisdom taken a far to forget
Why you think ever listen
Every word set out to argue
But when they gone inside
A word always remain
We all pupils in a world of constrain
Yet thats our mind insaine
In the words of our past love and lost
We grow on what they lost
And try to be the people that we never was
And always understand their respect
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Children
In our minds exhile
Our seed begins
Our insecurity a place our sin
What is life we bring to world
Is it just a carbon copy
No its our life a lost
Who we aint and who we must
We all been there a lost flame
To them its all in the discover
Our children they must be
Who we only could see
To them we aint perfect
But our words aint a lie
Sigh...
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Problem
Is our hill just a mountain
Will we ever fullfil
That place you know
Where it all begins
Is it the loan or the car a race
Or the peoples embrace
Every gold ring has a price
Every face a lost face
Every lie a promise fullfilled
:)
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Conclusion
No matter how you see it
Even if not covered here
We all the same
Love thy brother
Respect thy neighbour
Feed the many hunger
Resolve the dissorder
Lets live as one
No longer order
Unity and together
Our last setting sun
Copyright ©
mindset
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Re: The truth
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 07:57:36 PM AEST
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| okay i give you kudos for your last stanza unfortunately most will use it to preech at others and not teach themselves. Like the 3 to 1 post rule on this site there are many who don't follow itand many don't get there poems read because of it. I think it is kind of sad. 5 stars |
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Re: The truth
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by brew on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:03:06 PM AEST
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Well its the truth..yes, I read the whole,and thought it was lenghty, yet reallllllll...............thanks for the insight of it. Liked it
Brew~ |
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