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Where I am
Contributed by
eelyak
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Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 10:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When I look back on life and my travels the ups, the downs.
The times i could, the times i couldnt.
When life was easier, when life was fun.
I remember the air, the sky, the tears in my eyes
The pain i felt when i was young and didnt understand
how and why the world was so cruel.
I know now that the world was spinning and things
came around that molded me to the form i am today.
The whispers in my mind the timidity in my eyes
show on my countanence of a time of heartache and
strife.
One day i hope to replace the wrinkles and tears with
something more substantul and of cheer. I pray that at
that point in my life i can look back at my travels and
understand who, why and where i am.
Copyright ©
eelyak
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2005-09-24 22:48:12]
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Re: Where I am
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by remote on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 05:00:01 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, do tell of your motives. |
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Re: Where I am
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by Strawberry on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 12:41:48 PM AEST
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| Please tell of your motives. That is a very nice poem! Keep up the great writing. |
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Re: Where I am
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by Strawberry on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 12:42:15 PM AEST
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| Please tell of your motives. That is a very nice poem! Keep up the great writing. |
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Re: Where I am
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by bluewolf on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:50:49 PM AEST
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| like your poem, do tell your motives |
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