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Beaneath Stone & Flowers
Contributed by
ForlornSapphire
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Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 03:09:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Through swollen eyes, I gaze upon your bed; Your eternal resting place, And I wonder why it had to be. Many years before You stole my innocence Which concieved such a hate, So vicious and so cruel. Had I only known That my hand was part Of the fate that you sealed, Would things have been different? If only I would have said a kinder word; If only I would have smiled. Could I have stopped it? Could I have stopped you? There are no answers And there will never be, For you slumber silently Beneath stone and flowers.
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Re: Beaneath Stone & Flowers
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:20:26 AM AEST (User
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Nice one, simple and straight from the heart. |
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Re: Beaneath Stone & Flowers
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:54:30 AM AEST (User
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So sad but written well.
I'm sorry for your loss.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Beaneath Stone & Flowers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 08:22:45 AM AEST (User
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I ask these questions too and surprisingly there are answers. You just have to look in the right place. |
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Re: Beaneath Stone & Flowers
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 11:09:00 PM AEST (User
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First poem of yours I've read, and just wanted to say welcome to the site. Amazing write btw, very heartfelt and expressive, I loved it. Great write, can't wait for more.
- Cassy |
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