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_Take me back Home_
Contributed by
reecy
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 01:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Another summer day
Has come and gone away
surrounded by
A million people I
Still feel all alone,
I miss you, you know
i've been speaking out the conversations
that i'd have with you
Each one begins with," i'm fine, but how are you?"
i would share them with you but i know
it's just not good enough
My words were cold and flat
And you deserve more than that
feel just like Im living someone elses life
Its like I just stepped outside
When everything was going right
And I know just why you could not
Come along with me
But this was not your dream
But you always believed in me
Another winter day has come and gone away
so come take me home
it'll all be alright if you meet me tonight ,
and take me back home
I
Copyright ©
reecy
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2005-09-25 13:41:07]
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Re: _Take me back Home_
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by Archie on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 02:13:31 PM AEST
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| I am not sure what to make of this. It looks like a problematic relationship that is starting to work out. It is not 100% clear |
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Re: _Take me back Home_
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by autumn_zephyr on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 06:01:08 PM AEST
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| Very nice, I didn't quite get it either myself, but it's well written. |
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Re: _Take me back Home_
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by mjiann on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:59:26 PM AEST
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| uh yeah this is a michael buble song. um, you should probably note that since its not the exact lyrics. but yeah, very not original. |
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