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Just a letter
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
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Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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Hi
My name is Amy.
I know by now you know.
That I asked,
is it my time to go?
I've sat here and cried my river.
I've sat here and shook hands with what I'll call death.
Satan is it my number you've pulled?
I lay here in my hospital bed and everyone I love has only bad things to say.
Why can't it be my rainy day?
Satan take me home with you!
Always
Amy
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2003-01-18 11:00:00]
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Re: Just a letter
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:07:04 AM AEST
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Oh dear Amy I ache for you I will say a prayer!
You dont want to go home with Satan,you will want to spread your wings with God! I hope you are doing ok,This peice touched me! Take Care! Christina |
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Re: Just a letter
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:01:46 AM AEST
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Yes I echo that you dont want to go home with satan. I've wanted to leave as well, but not with satan.
I've sat here and shook hands with what I'll call death.
That line was just wow. This was a very good poem although very sad.
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Re: Just a letter
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by TheVoice on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 11:02:06 PM AEST
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Hi Amy,
My name is Bruce and I know you know that I have prayed for your life to be spared, for you to be healed. When it is your time to have your number called, you will be riding the steps up, not down. God and I are not giving up on you!!!!
Love,
The Voice
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