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Eye Contact; Weakened Knees.
Contributed by
SunflowersAndTea
on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:45:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've smiled at surprise,
My fingers laced with yours,
My heart, it begs for mercy,
My soul humble on all fours.
The sparkles in my eyes,
Conform to gold green flecks,
For I knew not the potent potion,
Would have this wanton effect.
I've thrice beckoned the passion,
That explores my lonely soul,
And that crevice I can not fathom,
Has now become my singular goal.
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Re: Eye Contact; Weakened Knees.
(User Rating: 1 )
by brew on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 10:50:50 PM AEST
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So deep, and elegantly written. Written with such emotion, of having one, yet maybe not.! Liked this.
Brew~ |
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Re: Eye Contact; Weakened Knees.
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:50:15 AM AEST
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a deep and powerful write, I liked this a lot.
As brew said, strong emotion.
Keep it up.
hugs, john |
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Re: Eye Contact; Weakened Knees.
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:08:10 AM AEST
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Well put. I love the way you use words. You have a great talenlt. I am honored to have met you.
I eagerly await your next post.
Take care, and welcome.
David |
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Re: Eye Contact; Weakened Knees.
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by Caged Soul on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:39:39 AM AEST
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I'm totally in love with the way you have written this piece.
"I've smiled at surprise,
My fingers laced with yours,
My heart, it begs for mercy,
My soul humble on all fours."
That is pure poetry right there! For me it speaks of love wanted, yet to be aquired and deeply desired.
This poem is a perfect example of less being more. It's got depht without being too complicated and is really easy to read and relate to.
I just love the way your soul flows!
~souLBro~ |
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Re: Eye Contact; Weakened Knees.
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by WAE on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:22:02 PM AEST
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Sweet, soft, and romantic. It flows very good.
Alex |
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