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Love is an action taken.
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:24:33 AM in AEST
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Love is an action taken.
There is nothing left to say.
Love is the reflection of itself.
How do I explain this?
How do I say what I see?
Love is a suffering.
A child lifts her hand.
A man disregards her lies.
A woman smiles as I pass by.
I smile back.
She is alone.
I am alone.
We are silent.
A young man cries and laughs and drinks.
A young woman finds release, bottles up, endures.
A phone rings.
A phone is broken static left hanging by its head.
A space is left after every point.
There are not enough words.
A woman holds her head.
A man holds his beer.
A song plays over stereos.
It is the same song.
It is always the same song,
singing different voices.
It is freedom forgotten by freedom.
It is an action taken.
We feel nothing.
We feel pain.
We feel forever.
We do not feel time.
We do not feel love.
Love is an action taken.
There are holes in his hands.
There are holes in his sides,
and water is the closest thing we have.
He wears the thorn upon his head.
He wears the thorn,
and water is the closest thing we have.
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by Lollypopxcore on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 01:50:31 AM AEST
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| Perfect. I loved it. |
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:52:33 AM AEST
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| so true, i especially like the last two stanzas, amazing write |
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:54:59 AM AEST
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Awesome write, my friend.
Very creative and oh so true.
In other words luv shows and not just tells.
Any one can say I luv you all day long but it takes real luv to show it.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by JenJen on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:20:49 AM AEST
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omg i love this poem it is so sweet and meaningful well done gd luck wit everything
jenni
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:10:31 PM AEST
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Well done... Emy said it all...
Jenni |
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:25:17 PM AEST
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Yes, for sure, actions speak much louder and longer than words. Fantastic write.
Rita |
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:24:04 AM AEST
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Ending a love poem with the ultimate love story, well done.
Great poem.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Love is an action taken.
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by Loende on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:25:39 AM AEST
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The first line got me, the last line made me weep. A great job. Thank you for posting.
Be well,
Loende |
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