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choices
Contributed by
shaggy2468
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:33:11 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Life is something to hold on to weather you like it or not. Its going to be ther right by you weather it's messing up or helping you. People can change there life so can you. it dosen't mean that your life will be perfect what it means is life can be good or bad it is your choice. what do you choose.
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Re: choices
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by maestar on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:38:37 AM AEST
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so rite very good.
loved it. |
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Re: choices
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by Caged Soul on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:41:37 AM AEST
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I don't know whether this is a poem or just a general comment. Either way there is some trueness in what your saying.
A bit of constructive crit. - work on your spelling, it makes it that much easier for the reader to understand your work.
See you around.
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Re: choices
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 12:50:06 PM AEST
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not EXACTLY a poem...but it's good anyway...and i agree with you...
- Bethani - |
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