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Narnia
Contributed by
maestar
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:37:41 AM in AEST
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.My fingers splintered my your wood, my eyes blind in the dark,
And passed the coats and mothball smell I find I’m in a wood or park.
The only light a lamppost seemingly out of place,
And what’s the next thing I see? A little strange mans face.
Soon my siblings will be here and we will save the day,
The lion is our hero, for him we shout hurray.
So skipping all the in between to shorten my write,
In the end their back at home exactly the same night.
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Re: Narnia
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:18:38 PM AEST
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If this is what i think you are talking about it is one of my favorite stories too.
four children went through a door
and entered in a wintry wood
and there with the help of a great lion
banished the queen of ice for good |
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Re: Narnia
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by ForlornSapphire on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:35:24 PM AEST
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| Short Sweet and to the point. Very direct. Love it |
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Re: Narnia
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by ever1der on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 02:49:43 PM AEST
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| great. |
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Re: Narnia
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 04:18:14 PM AEST
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Ah, one of my grandchildren's favorites, The Lion, The Witch, And The Wardrobe. I did so thoroughly enjoy that book. Always wanted to try 'Turkish Delights", lol.
Rita |
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Re: Narnia
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:13:29 PM AEST
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Awesome, awesome...The Tales of Narnia is my favourite series; The
Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe being my favourite book from that!
Did you know there is a movie coming out? I can't wait to see it!
Short or no, this was excellent!
~Breezy |
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Re: Narnia
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by Manda2 on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:54:26 AM AEST
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| Brilliant Mae! I think you did great reading all six of these wonderful books and your poem is a real tribute to the marvelous adventure. Well done. |
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