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Dear Sister Ive yet to Meet
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:30:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Wow!
Weve so much in common
yet how much more different can we be?
seeing that you are you,
and I am me.
Yes its true
we both have poetic souls
yet while your is whole
mine... well mine is shattered.
You write darkly
with sadness and depression.
Whereas I write emotionally
from your father. from my past.
He is the one who made me me,
he created my insanity,
that day he disowned me,
told me he didnt want me.
You say he cant think about me
without tears coming to his eyes
when Im ready I should talk to him.
But heres the thing
I dont want to make a grown man cry.
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2005-09-26 12:30:24]
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Re: Dear Sister Ive yet to Meet
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by remote on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 03:30:41 PM AEST
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| Very sad and touching write, my heart breaks reading this. |
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Re: Dear Sister Ive yet to Meet
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 10:16:40 AM AEST
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very sad, tears almost come to my eyes...but emotional poems make the best...they have the feeling in them that others don't.
great write
- ALiEN - |
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