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Just being............Oneself
Contributed by
brew
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:03:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Open the mind, and all thoughts ,flow
Gives, one some new looks, for room to grow
Expanding horizons, and taking differ turns
Wonders if it, was all just certain concerns
A new found path, that shows a certain light
Happiness, and newness, that gives it a fight
Sun is shining, with a different array
Roses are blooming, with no dismay
Sometimes giving, more than you should ever receive
Gives so much more than the other beleives
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:09:22 PM AEST
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lovely peace of inspiration
Michelle |
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:11:18 PM AEST
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this was excellent, a pleasure to read
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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Sweet words of wisdom my friend. Thanks so much for sharing.
hugs, john |
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:27:34 PM AEST
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Nice one Dayna...almost sounds like a friendship blossoming into something a bit more...? I like your thought process in this write. Good job: )
Scorp. |
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:44:46 PM AEST
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Well, my opinion seems to differ here. From this write I think that if we rush and give too much too soon we take the shine off an otherwise bright friendship. Too much information, too much spirit, too much of anything slows the eager anticipation to a halt. Example: sensuality makes one use one own imagination which is exciting; eroticism or pornography lay it all out right in front of you and when it is over you have it all. Nothing left to be excited about. Kick me if I am wrong, lol.
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Mom R |
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:20:03 AM AEST
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Thanks all, for the nice comments.......! And mom Rita, its JUST a Friendship poem, of making new friends. letting, ones know they can and have a trusted friend, if they see it.! LOL...........Nothing more, nothing less.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 02:43:12 PM AEST
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Mothers worry you know. It is my JOB. If I didn't care, you could give all you wanted. But I think sometimes we all just give too much too soon, lol. Friendships are great as long as they work both ways.
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by sararose1950 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:18:09 PM AEST
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| love the feel of this-sometimes takes years just to be oneself- some never even get there |
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:11:13 PM AEST
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Giving is great, to give, you receive more... its the takers that have problems, they will run you dry. Everyone knows, there must be that water well from which we have to keep full, for others come along and take too much, our well runs dry.
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by ArsenicMyst on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 12:02:08 AM AEST
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every line on their own are worth the musings
for a poet to ponder for their labors ...
but you combined them so well here ...
this is a very thoughtful poem ...
and beautifully uncomplicated
¸·:·´Arsenic
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Re: Just being............Oneself
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by candysears on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:34:28 PM AEST
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This is just being nice.....Very nice write i most profess...God Bless!
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