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the end
Contributed by
expired_promises
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Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:10:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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His car door slams
my world, my life, my heart shakes
time is up
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2005-09-26 21:10:21]
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Re: the end
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by sick_n_twisted on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:54:56 PM AEST
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| good right and im sorry aboutthe break up but arent haikus supposed to be bout nature? |
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Re: the end
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by strider on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:53:35 AM AEST
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| nice one, I think we should be allowed to interpret any poet form the best we can |
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Re: the end
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by STECKS on
Wednesday, 14th December 2005 @ 11:10:53 AM AEST
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| nice write. small writing that speaks alot more. |
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