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One Mistake
Contributed by
Tru2Myself
on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 10:49:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Watching your face fall... That was the hardest part of all Of course I had to tell you Would you rather me lie or tell the truth? Please forgive me Cant you see? Youre the only one for me So I stand in this room staring at you bowed head Im barely hanging on by a thread I never meant to hurt you so much Im longing for just one more touch But now it seems I will never feel your sweet embrace Or the sensation of your fingers on my face Now I wish I could take it all back Please just this once cut me some slack I swear I will never again hurt you Please believe me this is true I love you
Why is it that just one mistake Can make two fragile hearts break Why is it that no one can turn back time And hit reverse and erase the crime Why did fate pick me and you To tear apart, to rip it two And why cant you see That youre the only one for me
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Re: One Mistake
(User Rating: 1 ) by Khadrane on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:35:45 AM AEST (User
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I really liked it. It just genuinely captured the feeling you were going for, and the meter and flow were good too. Well done! |
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