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Dagger Filled Eyes
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I see your dagger filled eyes
Cutting me apart
Do you think your opinion really matters?
I DON'T EVEN KNOW YOU!
Your just hostile to the words
Written on my legs
You hate reading how my week went,
BUT YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW... so don't try
You still stare as I slip under the water
Do you expect me to break into tears?
Sure it stings or do you wanna look somemore?
YOUR NO SICKER THAN ME!
Your afraid of this little bit of abnormality
Does it wound your spirit?
Crawl over you like a thousand spiders?
You make me sick
Maybe I'll cry
Because your so ***** IGNORANT
Copyright ©
bobotheclown
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2003-01-18 15:00:00]
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 03:17:10 PM AEST
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wow.. well written. I hope you dont feel so bad know.
mckayla |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 04:19:05 PM AEST
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Awwww, Joel, your a great person and who cares about their opinion, (you know what is said about opinions anyway) we love you:)
huggs always Nessa |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by OreO on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 01:32:43 PM AEST
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So many people cannot understand and they do treat us as tho we are abnormal, which hurts far worse than any words embedded on our skin they could possibly read.....people fear the unknown, but sometimes if they would stop and take the time to really listen, and really get a little closer to take a look .......perhaps they would see....that were not so abnormal after all.....it's sad.....this is sad.....and it angers me when people act this way as well.....beautiful write joel you put it all together very nicely my friend...as always it's a pleasure to read you....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 02:56:25 PM AEST
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| oh...this is so good... |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:03:53 PM AEST
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most people fear what they don't understand.
just keep writing and i'll keep reading
Sharon |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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| this is very good, i like it! glad you posted it for us to read. |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 08:54:03 AM AEST
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Hello Joel
It's good to be here again and to read your compelling poetry again. I can identify very well with this one ....well written as always.
Love Chrissie x |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by M on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:34:19 AM AEST
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| ooo, this is amazing, and, ye, who cares what they think, they don't know anything. keep writing. |
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Re: Dagger Filled Eyes
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by deadly_blaZe on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 06:44:20 PM AEST
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| we say we dont care...but if we could only express how much we do |
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