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Crying over a bowl of hot soup
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 11:10:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Broken hearts, saddened guts
I cry for my moms birth of me
A painful lie, disappointed sighs
I cry for the worlds thing taken up by me
Im sorry I was a lot of trouble
Im sorry I werent able to stop bad quarrels
Im sorry for you
Having to know me
And spending your lifetime and money all wasted on me
I apologize for I know I dont deserve
Any good things
Im sorry; I apologize only being good enough to be a reserve
In anything I participate in
Im sorry Im not smart enough
Im sorry Ill never be good enough
Im sorry that I never ever sound sincere enough for you
Im really. Really. Sorry.
Dear mama, I love you so
But Im sorry your expectations
Cant be fulfilled by me
I no longer am what you wish I were
For, the older I grow, the more you expect
And Im sorry not being able to catch up
Or reach up to the standards you so wish for me to clinch
Crooked smiles, briefed nods
I cry for my moms birth of me
Gripping tears, crowded fears
I cry for this world
And me.
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2005-09-27 11:10:18]
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Re: Crying over a bowl of hot soup
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pisces101 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:52:34 PM AEST
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| the poetry is very nice. and everyone has felt this way... you get your emotions out well.. the only thing i suggest you work on is the rhyme. sounded a bit studdered. but the poem is beautiful. keepit up |
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