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Do You Want to Fall In Love?
Contributed by
strider
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 12:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Do you want to fall in love?
I dont know if it is for all
But since I set my eyes on you
The thought is but renewed
The way you smile
Even when my words are not fly
The curves on your waist line
Has got me wishing they were mine.
When you bend your neck
Methinks you need a peck
When you blush
I feel a rush!
Your lips
Those, I want to kiss
Your hips
Those pair of bliss.
To make love to you
Is but a dreaming
For I know it wont come true
But Ill keep the dream.
Copyright ©
strider
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2005-09-27 12:10:13]
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Re: Do You Want to Fall In Love?
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by remote on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 02:07:54 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this one, keep the dream alive, never know when it comes true. |
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Re: Do You Want to Fall In Love?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:43:39 PM AEST
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What a great poem. So refreshingly
sweet and lovely. I enjoyed this!
~Breezy
ps..love the sn too!!!! |
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Re: Do You Want to Fall In Love?
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:58:02 PM AEST
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| There is a hint of sadness in your poem. Don't be so quick to presume things. Love has a way of working out that can not be fathomed |
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Re: Do You Want to Fall In Love?
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 05:14:03 AM AEST
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It is a better question then most. Consider it well before answering.
Well written.
Take care.
David |
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