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Circle of Enlightenment
Contributed by
remote
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:53:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A straight line
with no within
and without
bends unto itself
transforms into
a circle
The circle
little space inside
infinite space outside
Our minds, that's how it is
so little inside
and so much more outside
All Wisdom and religions
seek to erase
the boundries of ignorance
Misinterpreted
they just misshapen
a perfect circle
Yes, there's beauty
to behold in shaped
circle of ignorance
It's battered and bleeds
when tampered with
wisdom and reason
Religions and wisdom
with right intentions
stretches the horizon
a circle with centre
without any boundries
finally they enlighten
(If you are one of those saying, "what the heck was that?",
elaboration of this is on my blog, it would be still be deeper than this anyway)
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Re: Circle of Enlightenment
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:23:44 PM AEST
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This is an excellent write. Great perception of the world and all its ills if I am correct.. If my perception of this is wrong, let me know...
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Re: Circle of Enlightenment
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by WAE on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:49:17 PM AEST
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Nice one... Deep indeed... Reminds me something...
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Re: Circle of Enlightenment
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 07:39:40 PM AEST
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A revolving, circle of all..........At least thats what, i got.
Maybe Im too deep, or not deep enough.......but, i think its ones opinion. Just like all. Good, write, tho. made you.................THINK.
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Re: Circle of Enlightenment
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by Kie-Kie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:19:28 PM AEST
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*is in awe* that's truely a VERY deep right
What a wonderful rhythem too... almost like there were drums in the background just banging at every other syllable...
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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