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Feeling of the Day
Contributed by
shattered_soul
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:17:42 PM in AEST
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The wind pushes down
Deep inside my soul
mixing every feeling
like a whirlwind with leaves.
Finale like a hand
reaching down from above
pulls a feeling above the rest
and places it deep with my chest
across my heart.
This is my feeling for the day
sadness,
happiness
whatever it is
its whats placed upon my heart.
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2005-09-27 16:17:42]
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Re: Feeling of the Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:35:26 PM AEST
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| even tho you wrote this a while ago i still think it is really good |
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Re: Feeling of the Day
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:24:20 PM AEST
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| Yes I think it is good too.I've felt the wind mixing every thing up inside.This especially happens when you are thirteen.It's a pretty mixed up time, Ros |
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Re: Feeling of the Day
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by Hybridasher on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:38:58 AM AEST
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| I think it was great and love reading your poems. They make me sit down and really think about my life and other things. |
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