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wow... i wrote this YEARS ago. my style is VERY dif. now, i'm darker now...
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sprinter27
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:44:57 PM in AEST
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I am so jealous of those clouds
For they float so high above these grounds
Here I am wishing that I could fly so high
So high that I wouldnt be afraid to try
Try anything and everything and to be glad
So that I couldnt easily get mad
I would love to start to fly
Soar up high in the sky
Above the clouds
So for once they would be jealous because someone else
Is higher above the grounds
*I know, I know, VERY different from my work now. Notice the difference? ~sprints
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Re: wow... i wrote this YEARS ago. my style is VERY dif. now, i'm darker now...
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:59:45 PM AEST
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Ummm yeah...I definitely notice the difference :O
Very simple rhyme scheme, but I like the concept, and the lighter feel to this write. It shows us a different side of Sprints...hehe!
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Re: wow... i wrote this YEARS ago. my style is VERY dif. now, i'm darker now...
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 08:59:52 PM AEST
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| I have not read enough of your poetry to notice a differance. I can relate to this poem both in good and bad ways. We all change as writers as time goes by. |
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