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Breath
Contributed by
jajalovey
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:27:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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The dark of life comes and
The air fills with dread
The cold winds hit hard
And your spirit seems dead
Your mistake cast about you
You struggle to stay afloat
Slowly sinking to the depths below
You are drowning in the sea of trials
The load may be heavy my child for
This is a test
But I give the breath for you to breathe.
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jajalovey
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2005-09-28 01:27:26]
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Re: Breath
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:56:58 AM AEST
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| i'm tired of reading about darkness and the sun and the air......people please |
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Re: Breath
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:42:24 AM AEST
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Mercy, mercy seems like someone is very cranky today.
Good work, my friend.
Jus let someone try to live without air, sun-n-darkness.
keep writing 'cause u have much talent and don't ever let any one conveince u different.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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