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waiting
Contributed by
emokid
on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:45:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Keep pushing
pen to the paper
try to break
on through
the wall that holds back
the ocean of ink
that I need
to cleanse my soul
waiting for the water
to wash over me
Every waking hour
I wait for my muse
to visit her light shone
round about me to show me
the path I must take
my angel show me
my redeption
light my path
come to me muse
come and save my soul
bang my head
against the wall
to get the words out
what else can I do
til she comes
I sit in the dark
waiting on her
to revisit me
so I cleanse
my soul yet again
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emokid
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2005-09-28 01:45:54]
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Re: waiting
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:55:47 AM AEST
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| "come and save my soul" "i bang my head agains the wall to get the words out". nice |
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Re: waiting
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:37:12 AM AEST
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Well it's really self explanatory.
I'd call it a masterpeice.
It's about writing, cleansing the soul, your muse and just all around good write.
U go friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: waiting
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:24:35 AM AEST
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| This is an inspirational poem. Thanks for sharing where your inspiration comes from. |
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Re: waiting
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by inoc on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:35:33 PM AEST
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keep up the good pen flow and you will break through that wall...
I think also you can write a masterpiece as this one is
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