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Home Sweet Home
Contributed by
Rickshaw
on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:15:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She knows that I'm not happy here,
She knows my mind ain't too clear,
She's trying to make me see the light,
But I aint going out without a fight,
She cries herself to sleep at night,
She dreams of meeting Mr Right,
Did their ships pass in the night,
Well I never said to turn off her light.
She's coming to try and sort it out,
She is trying to relieve my doubt,
She knows that I can't live alone,
She's going to take me home sweet home.
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Rickshaw
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2005-09-28 07:15:20]
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:13:59 AM AEST
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| This song reminds me of a John Denver song. You hvae put together a very good poem. |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by mylady on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:33:29 AM AEST
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| Nice poem same time sad ..Wish you a sweet home.. |
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Re: Home Sweet Home
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:54:50 AM AEST
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i like this poem a lot. it kind of reminds me of myself. good poem no doubt....
but what about if you said .... going "down" with out a fight.... going "out' with"out" a fight. breaks it up a little.
great job
sarah |
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