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Untitled
Contributed by
Maxximus
on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The shapeless sky bends To illuminate the night Casting silver moon-drops That hold dreams in flight The horizon holds fires that have risen again The same visions of children and men If these memories are as real as they seem Then the souls of my friends eternally gleam My heart may rest And my breathing may slow As the wind gently whispers "I know" The wound has healed But I do not wish to forget There has not been one life I regret In this nameless evening of the moons ghostly thrall Sitting peacefully alone I'm not alone at all
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2005-09-28 15:17:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by loopylou on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:11:29 PM AEST (User
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good poem i liked the ending best. |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by anangel_1593 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST (User
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The beat is a little weird at parts, but all in all, it's a great poem. A poem i can read (after i memorize it :) ) when i'm sad or down, or i break up with one of my friends. Good stuff. Ana |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:21:32 PM AEST (User
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I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by sararose1950 on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:26:19 AM AEST (User
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like a glimpse into eternity- past lives-excellent |
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